Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems.
Do you agree or disagree?
Scientifically, human beings become what they consume every day. While meat deems to be the unchangeable dish daily, I hold that vegetarianism would play an essential role in improving global health.
One of the main reasons why vegan diets become so ubiquitous is because live foods keep our bodies alive and agile. If individuals want their piece of life manifest at its best function, they need to eat a certain amount of raw vegetables and fruits. Secondly, carrying death in a body may cause certain inertia, such as illness and anger. For example, when one gets severe ailment, the patient instinctively aware that raw vegetables and fruits are the best foods to regain his vitality quickly.
Eating meat creates suffering for other beings. Taking the egg industry as an example, female chickens receive a large amount of chemical intake within a small cage as well as its anger; as a result, people often have to cut off their beak that prevents them from hurting others. After that, people consume that negative energy and transfer it into our body and mind. Additionally, if people want to raise cattle, vast areas of woodland shall be cut down for grazing animals. And to raise them, farmers have to supply an enormous amount of vegetables or meat, in case they want to produce organic food. And thus, we can erase the third world hunger by just reducing meat consumption statistically.
In brief, vegetarianism may be considered a so-called “vegetarianism”, but flex-vegan and flexitarianism are good options for fullfledged longevity. That would heel your mental and physical health tremendously to a certain extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thus, well, while, for example, in brief, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13432835821 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86785714236 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686567164179 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5175956958 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2857142857 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116470812471 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389553589766 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357158164445 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677620492326 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.008010988961 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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