Excessive traffic has made cities unpleasant places to live and work in. For this reason, private cars should be completely banned from city centres. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this topic it is argued that the city life has become more troublesome due to the increase in traffic. one method suggested is to reduce the private cars from heavy traffic areas like the city centres. this essay will discuss about how stopping the use of personal vehicle is not a very effective way to lower the traffic time and suggest a solution to the problem of traffic in cities.
it is social status these days to own a car and drive it to office daily. Not only is it comfortable but also it is easier. From my personal experience I can say that when I have a car at my house I am so relieved even if I am late to work and vice versa if I have a my car at office I am not worried about late meetings. Nevertheless every thing has some bad side effects to them. Considering a office of 600 people if everybody drives their own vehicle to office firstly it will definitely crowd the streets and the office, secondly it will be causing a lot of pollution. so in my opinion instead of completely banning the use of private vehicles an alternative would be allow the particular vehicle only on a praticular day of the week , this would make people try to share their vehicles which would help in reduction not only of traffice but also of pollution.
Additionally a very effective solution to the problem of traffic would be to start the use of bicycles. To illustrate people in Netherlands drive their cycle to offic daily. As a result of this the people are much healthier as well as they do not have such a huge crisis of traffic. this is one clear example of a effective solution to the chaos of traffic.
In conclusion i would like to say that banning the vehicle would increase the problem of general mass and would be very difficult to follow. Hence, we should look at the alternative approach of sharing the personal vehicle and starting the use of cycles for our day to day activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42613636364 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5520824938 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480113636364 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1422031288 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.866666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179508370143 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610034062368 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562989932844 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113962017636 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551364731201 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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