Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.
What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
Climate change becomes the concern of many inhabitants in the world. The shortage of rainfall and reducing snow across the globe indicate that the government should follow the regulation which is established by an environmental organization. The reason behind this phenomenon is emission. The air is polluted while countries developed. In this essay, I will outline the main reason and bring a solution that now exists to resolve this problem.
Air pollution and plant reduction are the main reason for this phenomenon. Nowadays, more developed countries consume fossil fuels as a significant source of energy. The more people have their cars, and the more manufacture build-up which absorbs this kind of power. According to one study, carbon dioxide has been increased sharply since twenty years ago. Besides, humans destroyed nature because they want to use them for their best, and consequently, forests and plans are reduced that cause earth could not produce enough oxygen to emit to the air. So if the toxic energy has not been reduced, it would have eventually made earth as a place that no longer any human could live.
For managing this problem, a well-known institution has established a regulation for all countries across the globe, particularly for developed countries. On this document that is submitted in France, all countries have promised to reduce the emission substantially by 2025. For this purpose, the government should put heavy taxes on companies that are currently used fossil fuels instead of using green energy. Hopefully, in Nordic countries, most manufactures replicate their source of energy with solar or wind power. Apart from these countries, still united states and other major industrialized countries reluctant to participate in this journey.
In sum, global warming is caused by humans in a way that more pollution created and more plants diminished. Fortunately, the regulation has been agreed by all countries to resolve this problem, and some countries like Denmark, Sweden, and Norway are a pioneer in implementing the law which now manipulates their energy from wind and sun.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...son behind this phenomenon is emission. The air is polluted while countries develop...
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Line 13, column 339, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pulates their energy from wind and sun.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, if, so, still, well, while, apart from, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36011904762 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79574405253 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1925396908 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.055555556 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0494948553533 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0167767403585 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334213762325 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0356893870672 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259394954385 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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