Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
A developing country can never make progress until the literacy rate and economic conditions are at par with the developed countries. However, I disagree that the government of developed countries should solely take the responsibility especially by spending the money earned by the taxes of their citizens for helping the poor nations.
Beyond any qualms there are myriads of logical reasons to prove that it is quiet unfair for the citizens of developed countries. Tax is hard earned money of the citizens of a country and it is promised by the government to spend it on the citizens to provide them necessary facilities such as transportation and medical aid and thus make their lives easier. If the government starts spending this money for the betterment of other countries then it will betray the trust of the citizens of that country.
Instead of this strategy the Government should send volunteers who are willing for an exchange program to help the kids of poor nations in education. In this way it will be mutually beneficial for both the countries. Moreover, simply giving away money to poor countries is not a solution for solving the problem of illiteracy and economic setback of developing countries as there is no guarantee that this money will not be wasted in corruption. Government of poor countries should however learn to utilize their resources wisely or try to procure loans which they can return later on from rich countries so that they feel more dedicated and responsible not to waste this cash in the hands of fraudulent leaders.
In conclusion, I believe that it is not simply the wealthy and developed nations who should shoulder the responsibility of helping the poor countries by extending monetary support. However, the poor countries ought to take the responsibility themselves to prevent corruption and utilize their financial resources for the betterment of their country by increasing the standard of education, trade and housing. Will the leaders of poor countries think this way? Still remains a question.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, then, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13473053892 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84706611007 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491017964072 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3717392292 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.923076923 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195660213615 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789633158471 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624100402038 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132815881401 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300784221333 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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