Industrilization is the cause of environmental problems in a country. Do you agree?
Environmental problems are increasing substantially from the last decade which became problem for many nations. Some people assert that industries are one of the cause which creates detrimental environmental problems for such countries. I totally accede with the above statement, this essay will discuss why industrilization is one of the main cause of environmental problems.
First and foremost, Industries are damaging the air and undermining the oxygen quality. Smoke evicted bye chimneys pollute our air and cause harmful effects on ozone layer which also causing ultra-violet rays falling on earth and effecting people . Last year, Researchers found that London is the most polluted city in terms of air pollution. Factories are spreading disease in air which started harming us in the form of contaminated oxygen. Oxygen is one of the most important thing which human need to live which is contaminated by factories now.
Secondly, Though industries are helping in growing countries economy, they have pervasive on water contamination as well. Large number of factories throw their harmful garbage in the river or sea which causes such conundrums to the environment. The ganga is one of the example of such damages even though considered as the holy river in India. Waste chemicals evacuated from factories to rivers or sea are effecting humans and the water bodies as well.
To recapitulate, Even though industrilization provides jobs for skilled workers of a country but it is causing bad effects to our ecosystem. This essay discussed several issues which proves factories are one of the cause of environmental problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48101265823 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03526864223 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.2636468735 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.9230769231 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18820854743 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680759686698 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675180251519 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125846414794 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888151230402 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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