It is becoming increasingly expensive for museums to be open to the public. What would be the best solution to keep them open, in your opinion?
Although museums are the most significant way of preserving historical monuments and traditional values, however making them accessible for the general populace has become complicated due to the soaring sustaining expenses. In my opinion, imposing a trivial fee to visitors and subsidy from the government are major steps that can not be taken in order to assure the availability of these exhibitions.
Undoubtedly, the administration has numerous engagements, and they have to designate public funds to the fundamental social events such as education, health and infrastructure. However, the necessity of upholding these museums can not be disregarded because these showcases are the supreme way to protect many historical monuments, traditional events and arts but also disseminate awareness amongst a current generation. Thus, lawmakers must fund these exhibits to overhaul and further enhancements. For instance, Delhi National Museum contains events from the human development history such as footprints of various dinosaurs, hence it is an attraction for the school going students.
Further, putting the least charges for the visit from the general attendees would have a vast influence on the expansion of these buildings as the accumulated capital can be used for the nurturing and enhancement of these displays. For instance, the Delhi Railway museum of India is quite splendidly maintained through the public fund, and also visitors are being charged considerably higher fees. Not to mention, the infrastructure of several old museums has been deteriorating as a result of public interactions. Further, if there will be a cost involved in exploring these exhibitions, there would be limited hordes of people in these buildings hence less disturbance to the infrastructure.
To conclude, granting financial aid from the government and incorporating an insignificant touring fee method would be an ideal strategy to uphold these galleries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70989761092 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2113556392 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600682593857 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0095211131 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.090909091 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211875057093 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794433242917 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391545415013 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125732675833 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509539195441 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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