It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?
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The upbringing of a child is a deciding factor of his personality. It is influenced by various factors such as parents, surroundings, and the environment in which he grows up. Metro cities are more developed and give a better opportunity for parents to raise their children as opposed to raising them countryside. The essay will discuss my viewpoint as to why it is good for a child to be grown in a bigger city as compared to a town.
Children from Tier-1 cities get an extra edge over the others. They get more exposure, especially in co-curricular activities. They can chase their dreams easily and the struggle is less. For example, children residing in big cities can easily avail of opportunities which are in cult these days such as horse riding, learning advanced computers, or music/dance and many others, whereas, these kinds of resources are generally absent in tier-3 places. So, children should be raised in big cities.
Moreover, bigger cities have better education opportunities. These cities offer quality education which is on par with international standards. Students are exposed to the cut-throat competition which is apparently missing in the small cities. For instance, winners and even the participants of the global or country-level competitions such as Quizzes or entrance examinations, we generally observe that a major chunk of higher percentile scorers belong to big cities only, because they get better exposure.
In conclusion, I believe that children should be raised in big cities. As much as they provide better opportunities in pursuing their dreams, it also gives them an upper edge in other developments such as academics or extra curriculum activities
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The upbringing of a child is…
The upbringing of a child is a deciding factor of his personality. It is influenced by various factors such as parents, surroundings, and the environment in which he grows up. Metro cities are more developed and give a better opportunity for parents to raise their children as opposed to raising them countryside. The essay will discuss my viewpoint as to why it is good for a child to be grown in a bigger city as compared to a town.
Children from Tier-1 cities get an extra edge over the others. They get more exposure, especially in co-curricular activities. They can chase their dreams easily and the struggle is less. For example, children residing in big cities can easily avail of opportunities which are in cult these days such as horse riding, learning advanced computers, or music/dance and many others, whereas, these kinds of resources are generally absent in tier-3 places. So, children should be raised in big cities.
Moreover, bigger cities have better education opportunities. These cities offer quality education which is on par with international standards. Students are exposed to the cut-throat competition which is apparently missing in the small cities. For instance, winners and even the participants of the global or country-level competitions such as Quizzes or entrance examinations, we generally observe that a major chunk of higher percentile scorers belong to big cities only, because they get better exposure.
In conclusion, I believe that children should be raised in big cities. As much as they provide better opportunities in pursuing their dreams, it also gives them an upper edge in other developments such as academics or extra curriculum activities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, moreover, so, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22710622711 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03586331603 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582417582418 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0766234964 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225252750688 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713077181799 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513918947903 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133137990823 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325381256247 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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