It is important that we maintain and protect the beautiful building of the past, even if it is expensive for countries to do so.
Do you agree with this statement?
In recent years, there is a colossal upsurge in the trend to see the prodigies discussing to keep the ancient buildings. Some people claim that it is a responsibility of the nation to shield the antique structures which are profoundly fascinating even though it cost exorbitantly. In my opinion, it is paramount to conserve them to support the tourism economy and to acquire knowledge of history.
To commence with, one of the major reason is preventing old buildings will enhance the tourism sector. Moreover, tourism is a part-and-parcel of countries financial stability, so it expects to maintain exhaustively to entice more overseas visitors. For example, according to UNESCO, Brasil is on top of the tourism industry because of their ancient monuments such as forts, castles and cathedrals. As a result, an expenditure of these buildings will increase the chance of visitors, which consequently raise the wealth of the nation.
To add further credence to my assertion, not merely the economy but also these historic landmarks advantages inhabitants to learn about their biography. Furthermore, to study history, we need to get access to the internet and libraries but, the ancient buildings are the more reliable resource which offers us to learn our heritage value and culture directly. To exemplify, TajMahal in India is one of the greatest monument constructed with white marbles, which shows the rich history of India at the Mughal period.
To conclude, there is a plethora of cogent and compelling evidence to ensure the need for historic masterpieces. As far as I am concerned, traditional buildings are highly essential for countries economic stabilization besides the wisdom of history.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, as for, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38518518519 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06415400731 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614814814815 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5626879078 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.166666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117556061886 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379805086702 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03201079368 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652444926992 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356338055616 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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