It is often said that the subjects taught in schools are too academic in orientation and that it would be more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management, work and interpersonal skills.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The primary purpose of educational institutions is to produce well-versed employees who are capable of completing their work with efficiency; therefore; urging schools to focus on practical matter such as home management, work and interpersonal skills is a laudable initiative. However, this essay disagrees with this viewpoint as academic subjects is of paramount importance in specialty occupations, dealing with various circumstances in a systemic approach, increasing career opportunities and contributing to the development of the society.
First of all, while some occupations, such as waitressing or barber, necessitate a little academic background, other fields of work such as law or medicine requires a profound insight of the subject area. In the former situation, the know-how can be easily transmitted from the manager to novices. However, in the case of law or medicine, such vast amounts of information are oily embedded in books and other academic materials. In addition, modifications in law or health are likely to be common occurrences; therefore, academic learning is a must for most certain professions.
Secondly academic teaching favors the student by adopting a systemic approach which can be replicated across all situations. Practical experience, on the other hand, often negatively biases certain students. For instance, a hairdresser trainee may only be tasked with a particular type of haircut since it is the only one demanded by customers. Through academic training, not only subject-specific knowledge is improve but crucial thinking skills are also promote, so students can tackle problems which may arise with better solutions.
In addition, academic subjects can expand career prospects. Great academic achievements are usually seen as a sign of hard work, self-discipline and great determination. As a result, those who master academic subjects can get an enormous advantage over other candidates for the same jobs.
Last but not least, academic subjects can provide competent knowledge for students to make great innovations in later life. From scientific discoveries to technological advances, all these breakthroughs are based on academic knowledge. Home management, work and interpersonal skills, however, can provide students with down-to-earth experiences but cannot contribute much to the development of the society as academic subjects.
In conclusion, academic subjects can contribute to students’ success and the benefits of the society, so the idea of teaching only practical matters in the classroom should be abolished. On the contrary, the school curriculum should focus more on academic subjects so that students can have a brighter future door.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2304.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73134328358 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25460985903 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559701492537 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9538183533 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238235970245 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761869766954 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347717624815 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125368533875 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211680079647 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 78.4519038076 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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