Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
These days, international travel is more realistic then ever, many people decide to study or move aboard although there is a language barrier. While it is argued to cause social and practical problems, I totally agree with that and am going to describe reasons in this essay.
As one of the newcomers in Canada, I saw that many immigrants faced and suffered from various social problems related to their lack of language abilities. One reason is language-based discrimination, rather than race, color or where they are from. For example, it is well-known true that residents in Montreal where the main language is French often look down and discriminate against foreign tourists who do not speak their language or even other Canadian who mainly speak English. Furthermore, such people are easy to become a target for misdemeanors like a pickpocket due to their lack of language skills to report to the police or ask for help. Another issue would be social isolation. Many newcomers have a difficulty to make a friend in depth by their lack of communication skills, and this led them to isolate themselves, and suffering from homesick or loneliness.
The lack of language skills can cause even more problems in the practical aspect. First, you would struggle with minor tasks in daily life such as grocery shopping, taking a bus, perhaps paying a bill. In my personal experience, I had difficulty to describe certain food items to a grocery shop worker, which was a really frustrating moment for me because I even missed my last bus afterward. Second, following a school course will be much harder than native students. International pupils will experience difficulties in the aspect of reading and listening to a teacher's lecture as well as understanding the underlying meaning. Finally, this language barrier can be a stumbling block to find a job. If I am an employer, I would hire a native speaker rather than those relatively lacks language skills who may harm the business than good.
In conclusion, many people dream about living and studying in a remote country. I believe, however, they seem to overlook all the disadvantages mentioned above generated by the language gap.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, really, second, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04972375691 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85849540866 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60773480663 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3616692836 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.529411765 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21231259367 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059415284823 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593354648846 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103545180304 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398694966612 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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