Many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle. Others believe that governments should take care of it.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is little doubt about how vital it is for people to adopt a healthy lifestyle, but there
are conflicting views as to who should be responsible for its promotion and enforcement.
Although some believe that the government should shoulder this responsibility, others,
myself included, think it should be every individual’s duty.
People themselves benefit primarily in their personal lives from eating healthily and taking
more exercise. It allows them to remain healthy, avoid different illnesses like heart disease
and arthritis, and enjoy increased longevity. Living healthily also allows them to be more
active in the society and at work because they are more likely to feel energised and
refreshed throughout the day. Consequently, they can focus more on their social and
professional efforts, which could significantly increase their social and work status.
Therefore, it seems logical to hold every individual responsible for adopting a healthy
lifestyle.
Some argue that governments should enforce a healthy lifestyle because they have the
means to raise awareness through the educational system and introduce relevant
regulations obliging their citizens to make the necessary changes in their way of life.
However, most adults tend to change and adjust their lifestyle according to their
experiences and desires after leaving school, forgetting most, if not all, of what they have
been taught. Furthermore, it would be unwise for authorities to meddle in people’s private
lives and have them conform to any regulation that affect their personal lives.
In conclusion, I believe that individuals ought to bear the responsibility of following and
promoting a healthy way of life since they can enjoy the benefits in their personal, social
and work lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67032967033 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9663816949 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622710622711 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7560831301 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.727272727 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251045325928 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995185697114 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779253514499 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722840814693 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612506380412 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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