Missions to explore space are hugely expensive, and there are problems on Earth which demand attention. The number of these missions needs to be reduced.
Do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that space exploration missions require huge amount of money and this needs to be spend to tackle the problems on earth by reducing the number of missions. I completely agree with this point of view; however, this essay would shed light on both sides in following sub-sections.
To commence with, there are deluge of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that there are plethora of environmental issues have been occurring on the earth that need to be taken care of by the government. To illustrate it, global warming is on its alarm rate, which is causing to meet the glaciers. As a result of this, in some part of the world, people are confronting the natural disaster such as flooding and due to this, they become homeless. It cannot only overcome crime which some people commit because of poverty and underdevelopment, but also boost up the confidence towards reaching to their goals. Also, it will raise the economy of the developing countries. Thanks to wide range of advantages it offers, youth can enhance the quality and productivity of struggling nations with much ease, efficacy and convenience.
On the other hand, there are some benefits to explore the outer space. The primary one lies in the fact that people broaden their horizons by going to space and enrich their knowledge regarding the planets and living possibilities over there. Apart from this, exploring the space can enhance the economic growth of the country. Furthermore, satellite concepts give information about maps, weather forecast and many more. Addition to it, maps help us to find anything around the clock just with one application. These all things are possible with scientific research.
To conclude, although there are some merits of visiting the space, problems on the earth should not be ignored aa they are threatening to human lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'deluges'?
Suggestion: deluges
...ections. To commence with, there are deluge of arguments in favour of my stance. Th...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'meeting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: meeting
... is on its alarm rate, which is causing to meet the glaciers. As a result of this, in s...
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Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help us find' instead.
Suggestion: help us find
...ast and many more. Addition to it, maps help us to find anything around the clock just with one...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, apart from, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02752293578 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72207673748 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620795107034 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7005222856 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20443760127 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525702343754 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779907172181 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125854034281 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751543100934 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.