More and more people are stressed today than ever before. What are the causes of this stress? What can be done to address this problem?
It is true that today we are living in a competitive world which is full of stress than earlier. The level of stress has increased due to various reasons. This essay will discuss the factors which give to stress and certain solutions that could help to cut it.
The stress level varies from a child to adult and from rich to poor. In other words, each individual faces a different kind of stress. In this competitive era, the stress of child is due to getting high marks in secondary school, so that they could able to get admission in a top university, while an adult often faces because of getting a good job after graduation or job promotion at the workforce. Moreover, the rich people are in anxiety because of robbery, loss in business and kidnap, since the poor are worried about to have a luxurious life. Hence, each of us is running behind their goals to meet them in the form of stress than earlier.
Nevertheless, to overcome such stress a child, an adult and a government have to take little effort. Firstly, the government should cut the level of crime by increasing the patrol in the city to the safety of each citizen. Also, the government can increase the number of jobs for unemployed students, which will encourage them to have a better standard of living. By this effort, the stress level of rich people and an adult who is unemployed is reduced. Furthermore, if the child studied hard, not only could they get good marks in the exams, but also admission in top colleges; due to this the stress level of the child is mitigated.
In conclusion, the stress level is tremendously increased owing to the competition in the job factors for an adult and in schools for a child. However, it could cut with the help of government by increasing the number of jobs for unemployed and children could study hard to get admission in colleges.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65454545455 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55353155766 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472727272727 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6255750573 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16769624298 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699332616384 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464526340513 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117215617212 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561554974494 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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