One must give high priority to money or income while deciding any career or a job to do in future. Most of the people believe that income plays a crucial role in our career. However, In my opinion I strongly disagree that money alone plays a vital role in deciding one's career for various reasons.
Firstly, some of the high earning jobs might be risky and no security for job. Most of the high paying white collar corporate jobs are not permanent in majority of the companies because most of them are either contract based or project based. Once a contract or the project is accomplished the employer doesn't bother about the employee. As a result, one doing their job in such organization though, they paid well they have no job security.
Additionally, work places of some the high paid jobs might be far away from the hometown and family. For instance, the soldiers, commanders working for navy, need to stay far from their home and family working in ships for long durations. Though, these people earn huge income they will have homesick and will be doing their work with less efficiency. Resulting in some of the major failure in the ship or navigating towards the wrong direction.
In conclusion, I totally disagree that income alone doesn't paly a deciding factor for one's career or a job. However, one must know the risk factors of the job before deciding to do only just by considering good pay. Subsequently, need to consider about the workplace etiquette and family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78210116732 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48576318409 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552529182879 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.7650060005 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.7857142857 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238574688775 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853870634567 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693258964053 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14822159345 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570630557432 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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