Most of the world’s problems are caused by overpopulation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Disease, environmental pollution, poverty, and war are long-standing problems faced by human beings. All of them are more or less related to overpopulation.
Overpopulation in cities has posed stresses on people's health. Traffic congestion due to too many vehicles on the road degrades the air quality and threatens the health of city dwellers. Lack of living space pushes up the housing price and causes many people to live on the outskirts and commute to work. Although public facilities like hospitals and schools have operated in an overloaded state, patients still can't get sufficient treatment. The lifestyle built on this system is hardly healthy.
Besides, natural resources are being consumed at an alarming rate, which brought enormous problems to the environment. Today, once-fertile lands are becoming sterile because of the side effects of chemical fertilizer which is indispensable to support billions of people on earth. Forests are disappearing at an unprecedented pace, and oil is exhausting in an unsustainable way. What is worse, both of them contribute significantly to the greenhouse effect. With it comes a more unpredictable weather condition where disastrous extreme weather events happened more than ever.
Furthermore, resource scarcity has also brought other problems like war. It's quite common that people living in impoverished countries fall into war with surrounding states for food and other resources. In South Africa, combat between tribes for water or minerals is not unusual. Even relatively wealthy countries, like those in the Middle East, have been involved in the war for oil reserves.
In conclusion, the price paid to support the vast population on the earth is almost unbearable. Most of our problems are relevant to overpopulation directly or indirectly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... in an overloaded state, patients still cant get sufficient treatment. The lifestyle...
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Line 9, column 354, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an unsustainable way" with adverb for "unsustainable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...precedented pace, and oil is exhausting in an unsustainable way. What is worse, both of them contribute...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, still, well, in conclusion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57761732852 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0655538155 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678700361011 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.402958195 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.8333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3888888889 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0743717902952 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.02323482323 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338308562986 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0450842518629 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270599630275 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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