Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries.
What are the advantage and disadvantages of this?
Transnational corporations are opening more and more branches for their businesses in the poorer nations. Whilst a higher rate of employment for local residents is the main merit for such a trend, difficulties faced by local businesses to compete with these business titans is the main drawback.
When a multinational firm establishes a new branch in one of undeveloped states, this undoubtedly help secure lots of jobs for job seekers in these countries. This means less poverty, unemployment and more prosperity for this nation economy which can lead to better social stability and citizens' overall satisfaction. According to a recent study conducted by Cairo University in Egypt, 20-25 % of Egypt's workforce work for Egyptian divisions of global American companies, such as Pepsi, Google, Apple, General Motors and General Electric. Therefore, the benefits of having these establishments working in some of developing countries are obvious.
On the other hand, it is virtually impossible for national industries and local service providers to compete with multinational companies because they have huge budgets, mass production strategies, highly qualified employees, and strong links to both media and social media. These characteristics make it extremely tough for small national firms to challenge and compete with these mega-businesses. In the city where I live, over last few years, approximately 5 traditional restaurants have closed out because McDonald and KFC have opened up many shops for fast food. In such a case, People do not only gravitate to their tasty cuisine, but they also prefer them for their cheaper prices. Thus, transnational investments can somehow jeopardize the progress of local micro-economy by compelling small businesses to stop their operations.
In conclusion, having presented the aforementioned merits and demerits for multinational companies, it can be reiterated that while an increasing rate of employment in the poorer states definitely benefits their national economy, dire consequences on growing national industries and businesses because inability to compete with transnational ones can consider the main drawback.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7306501548 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18286803217 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2183905338 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.25 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0737565583159 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278728446547 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359444872734 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0449241447651 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383582144173 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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