Nowadays many people work from home. Some think it is beneficial, while others think it may distract the family routine. What is your opinion?
In moderns days, people struggle to keep perfect work-life balance. Whereas many believe that it is beneficial to work from home, others argue that this program may infiltrate on their personal schedule. I vehemently support the former view for some empirical reasons.
To begin with, those who support the latter view may consider that working from home may result in turbulence between personal and professional time. This is because when people operate from home, being active all the time is often required, as their employers may reach out to them anytime for updates and support due to uncertain working hours. For instance, the typical office hours are indeed 9 AM to 6 PM, and employers tend not to expect their employees to work beyond these hours, which is not a case when working from the home. If a person requires to work from home enduringly, it would impact their personal life negatively. Consequently, unnecessary tension and mental disturbance between family members.
On the contrary, I believe that the prime privilege of working from home is that the flexible timings to complete the working hours. Furthermore, less commuting means less traffic congestion hassle and less fuel consumption resulting in cost saving. For instance, People working remotely can often save most of their salary compared to office staff, and this would help them to manage unexpected expenses such as medical illness, and childbirth delivery. That’s why, working remotely from home is beneficial for employees to save money, and handle the emergency.
In conclusion, although it is daunting for many people to balance their time between family and office when they work from home, which puts them into a family crisis, working at their own pace and financial saving are the most significant perks, i believe, should be taken into account.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'working'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: working
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... personal life negatively. Consequently, unnecessary tension and mental disturban...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... saving are the most significant perks, i believe, should be taken into account. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21140939597 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55735742976 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56711409396 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3358202051 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.461538462 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251638973932 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102395733805 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604258518926 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174715115458 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379974620813 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.