People in all modern societies use drugs, but only youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that presents and other members of society often set a bed example.
Discuss the some effect of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
Fight with drugs was happened in long time ago, government has been make any requirement to avoid miss use of illegal drugs. Refer to several source like CNN News, BBC News, and OCBC News there are approximately 9870.000 million people died in a day effect addict oneself drugs.
Nowadays government not only make requirement to decries number o illegal drugs, but also develop some association that can counter rotation of drugs. With socialite the dangerous effect when we use the drugs over and also offering rehabilitation center. Majority drug addicts are young people in range age 15 to 25 year, in a year police was faced around 5000 case of illegal drugs and about 2000 other was get rehabilitation. However, number disseminations drugs is always increase in every years, recently there are gaining new variation of illegal drug. Its make war with illegal drugs will be more long time at the future.
Sending drug addicts in to the prison is not the best solution to solve this problem, even in reality drug convict able to consume it inside the jail. Not also consume but they also able to be large drugs mafia. Prison being like training place for dealers illegal drugs, in long-long time ago there are any large rotation of drug inside the prison. Its being long mark for us to break chain of illegal drugs, however, we should to war with them. No meter how long we have to fight.
In conclusion, we have to support government running the requirement properly and prioritize drug addicts for get rehabilitation, rather than imprison they to the jail.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88389513109 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53224516327 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576779026217 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.807533083 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.307692308 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20171685194 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779120542482 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436816542151 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117081356023 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800451139584 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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