people care his food system.Fast food plays the human lifes and causes diseases.
In the fast moving life, Everyone who doesn't care about his/her food cycles, which would impact the people health and immune system. i strenuously agree that the notion, and imposing such a reason behind the perception to get and improve the energy to get rid from such a diseases.
Being the existence of this generation, everything would augmented and easing could trapped with the illness, reason behind with the over consume of unhealthy foods. For instance, people fonding with the food called PIZZA, BURGER etc rather than the organic items, because of their tastes of some unnatural and contaminated ingredients, which predominantly devastated the immune system and lack the cells as weak. Thus, the factor, we should trim the usage of foreign made fast-food items and lower their consumability. Even though, government could by passing the laws and boost their takes to outweigh the consumed fast-food products.
Moreover, Obesity is the major diseases nearly 3/4th of population baited by them, which certainly causes the uncured diseases. I will put one of the primary example from my know-how, one of my friend fonding with their packaging food over the natural one ought to be getting weight increased and eventually he struggling a lot by cutback his gaining muscles. Hence, everyone knew that "Food is medicine, Medicine is food" and try to regret the over-usage of the fast-food consumption, which could be easily available in the market as a cheap price.
To sum up, phenomenon increasing of fast and packaging foods violates the health and immune system. Moreover, masses would be more aware about what we are eating and knowing about its gradient properties to get our lives more predominant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
In the fast moving life, Everyone who doesnt care about his/her food cycles, which w...
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Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...ct the people health and immune system. i strenuously agree that the notion, and ...
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Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a disease' or simply 'diseases'?
Suggestion: a disease; diseases
...improve the energy to get rid from such a diseases. Being the existence of this generatio...
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Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nce of this generation, everything would augmented and easing could trapped with ...
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Line 2, column 59, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'augment'
Suggestion: augment
...e of this generation, everything would augmented and easing could trapped with the illne...
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Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'trap'
Suggestion: trap
...thing would augmented and easing could trapped with the illness, reason behind with th...
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Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'struggles'.
Suggestion: struggles
...ting weight increased and eventually he struggling a lot by cutback his gaining muscles. H...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20143884892 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64915297597 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622302158273 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7723596561 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.454545455 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318688195769 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116659379134 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964255575156 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183297511262 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575862549934 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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