Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, the rate at which people commit abortions is increasing enormously, this has been an issue of concern. Even though some feel it ought to be legalised, others, however are in opposition to this. In my opinion, the government should not making this legal as it would lead to a rise in the mortality rate among newborns.
To begin with, people who are in support of this legalisation do so because of the large number of children in motherless homes. People bring in a lot of children who were found wandering on the streets with no family members. After further investigation, they usually discover that most of these toddlers were purposely left on the streets or in popular parks due to the fact that their mothers do not have the means to care for them. One example of this is the Central Park in New York city, it was reported that 200 toddlers where found at the park in 2018.
On the other hand, legalising foetus termination will bring up the number of infants deaths. This is because a lot of people would rather abort the baby themselves in order to save the cost of hospital bills. Therefore, they will take all sorts of concussions to terminate the baby on their own, but they will eventually be unsuccessful with their plight. After nine months of carrying the pregnancy, they give birth to infants whose immune system have been seriously damaged by the drugs taken while in the womb. To illustrate this, a recent research carried out at Havard Medical School shows that eighty percent of infant mortality is due to the mother taken wrong drug prescriptions.
In conclusion, although some want the government to permit people to abort legally, so as to reduce the number of children in foster care, in my opinion, approving abortion will raise the figure of babies and newborns deaths.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...n my opinion, the government should not making this legal as it would lead to a rise i...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ment to permit people to abort legally, so as to reduce the number of children in foster...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78025477707 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55768175758 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589171974522 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0859972691 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.461538462 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153424100916 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520298082936 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425476126364 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100736991626 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492012725261 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.