The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of modern lifestyle. What are advantages of this trend? Do the advantaged outwiegh the disadvantages?
The popularity of packaged food among individuals is rising day and day and it helps them to maintain balance with fast paced lifestyle. It brings numnerous advantages as it saves time, easily available and no need to learn cooking whereas the only disadvantage it may casue is deterimrntal effect on helath. Overall, the advantages outweung the disadvantages.
The first advantage of processed food is that saves lots of time and people can do perfom their other diurnal tasks by saving this time. Most of the individuals are working and live far from their families and do not have enough time to prepare food for them. As a conesquence, sometimes they skip their meals and fell sick but with availability of preserved food, they eat properly at regular intervals. Moreover, it proves as a boon fro the working females. Women have the responsibility to look after the houshold responsibilities and presseure from work to meet the deadlines, in such scenarious ready to eat food saves time for them and helps to maintain balance between life and work.
The other benefit of processed food is that it is easily available in all groceries shops. People are not required to visit from store to store to find their food which is wastage of time. Also, many companies are influenced by the popularity of processed foof among people such as Uber Eat, Insta Cart have delivery option for food as well, they can have all the commodities while sitting at home.
Whereas the potential damage the redy to cook food can bring is effect on helath. The food which is cooked at home if fresh and full of nutrients wheres the pacjed food has added preservatives which may casue harmful impact on human body. In fact, today due to dependency on convenient food, obesity has increased among people. Sometimes they prefer not to cook even during their holidays which is a sign of laziness.
To sum up what have discussed so far, the processed food has helped numerous deizens by saving their time,mainatining balance between household and work responsibilties and diminshing need of cooking when busy proving that the ebnefits outwiegh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
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Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'store to'.
Suggestion: store to
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: where's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, in fact, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91086350975 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72358737078 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512534818942 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 359.0 20.2975951904 1769% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1763.0 106.682146367 1653% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 359.0 20.7667163134 1729% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 96.0 7.06120827912 1360% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231316377411 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231316377411 0.084324248473 274% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130276053371 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532196190997 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 181.2 13.0946893788 1384% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -292.91 50.2224549098 -583% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 143.3 11.3001002004 1268% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.68 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.23 8.58950901804 294% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 145.6 10.1190380762 1439% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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