Some people play sport when they are young but then stop doing physical exercise when they become adults.
Why is this?
What can be done to solve this problem?
These days, adults do not show interest in performing physical activities whereas in their youth, they took participation in the sports actvities. The less interest among youngsters is due to more responsibilities they have with growing age. However, they can be encourage to do physical exercise by explaining its benfits in younger age.
The adults have less interest in sports activites because they do not have sufficient time to involve in games. When they are kids, they do not have any major responsiblites such as job and also no excessive burden of study. In higher gardes, their focus is to attain good score. Moreover, those who get indulged in their job, it’s roles and responsibilities they do not have leisure time to take part in any physical activity. The schedule is hectic and for workoholic person, work becomes their first priority, consequently they stop takig care of their well being.
The adults can be encouraged to do excercies by explaining them that with the growing age, they need to look after them. in schools, adults can be encouraged to play at National and International Level for any sports of their interest and scholarships can be given to them. As a result, others will be inspired from that and also join them. Moreover,the seminars can be conducted at workplace and organising some events in which they can encourage adults to take participate in games.
To sum up what have discussed so far, when a person get more liablities in life his interese gets shifted. The adults start focusing on their career more and less on their well being. In their younger age an impression can be left on their minds that physical fitness is also pivotal and they must perform some physcial activities on diurnal basis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...ing age. However, they can be encourage to do physical exercise by explaining its ben...
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Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...wing age, they need to look after them. in schools, adults can be encouraged to pl...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...d from that and also join them. Moreover,the seminars can be conducted at workplace ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, whereas, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93559322034 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74851504657 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538983050847 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4780951822 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30222795291 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10869880174 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060904407834 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190851612804 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035294879738 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.