Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some people have opinion that the geographic location where a person resides has huge impact on their personality and represent their culture whereas others believe that it has minor impact on their culture. According to my opinion, an individual’s culture is determined on basis of loaclity, however, we cannot deny the fact that it do not solemnly depends on that as there are some other factors such as mingling of cultures irrespective of location.
The first point to be considered is that place where an individual has spent his childhood has remark on his memory and cultural beliefs have significance in his life. A person has moral values, social ethics and ritulas which are confined to a specific region only and hence promotes ethincity. To shed more light to that, some nations have tradition that they can wear white attires on auspicious occasions such as marriage whereas other countries assume wearning white as sign of grief. Hence, different perception about same color consequemtly represnets two sets of socitey revealing that location does play imperative role.
On the other hand, there are some scenarios which repersnets that location does not matter with respect to one’s culture. Due to cultural convergenace at global level, people are adopting homogenous lifestyle and traditional barriers are no longer obstacles s. The flambayant culture of foreign countries has influenced individuals and they are adoption their liestyle. It can be observed that people are also learning numerous langua farnca such as English, French and Dutch although their native language is different.
To conclude, the cultures have become dynamic in nature, peple are adopting diferent cultures and are embracing the change as well. The country where they live has contribution in setting moral values, belifes but people are also experincing newness by bringing change in their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, well, whereas, such as, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35785953177 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69038964478 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605351170569 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4146781843 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261288079514 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862891842845 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080180128206 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154346953728 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874009027284 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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