Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Scientific research has gained widespread importance due to its ability to find solutions for various troubles of mankind. As such, research in various fields are being pursued by governments, individuals and private organisations. It is not advisable to restrict the liberal expansion of research programs and limit the scope of scientific research as government projects. This essay states that the government should not curtail the freedom of other agencies to produce effective solution for numerous problems as private companies mainly invest in enhancing customer experience.
First of all, governments have to focus on a variety of issues other than scientific research such as providing basic amenities and protection to its citizenry. This may deter the government from spending extravagantly in the scientific field, leading to a stagnant growth of science which may subsequently effect the progress in different fields including agriculture, transportation and entertainment. For example, Bt brinjal, a seed variety of brinjal with better pest resistance capacity was produced by a private Indian company, which helped many farmers in India, increasing the yield.
Moreover, private companies and individuals are not answerable to the public in regard to utilization of finances since they are using their own private funding. This gives them supreme freedom to carry out necessary research programmes. Additionally, many independent individuals have used their valuable time to partake in research activities. A few of such noteworthy scientists include Alexander Graham Bell, Thomas Alva Edison and Marie Curie.
In conclusion, research experiments should be carried out by private and public agencies in order to to produce fruitful results, without any constraints restraining them. Monopolisation of scientific research may only dwindle the spirit of innovation through extensive scientific research.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...rowth of science which may subsequently effect the progress in different fields includ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...by private and public agencies in order to to produce fruitful results, without any c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89285714286 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11702860862 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5650909666 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.923076923 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268291695561 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932226651918 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515490995237 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162473941096 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453167563119 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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