In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In some nations, a small sector of the population gets giant incomes, part of the population reckon that this is positive for nations, meanwhile, others argue that the government has to regulate these high wages. I would like to discuss both sides of the problem and then I will give my opinion about this.
Business owners and important people working for the government have access to big salaries, they argue that is part of a salary scale and because they deserve that high income because of their jobs demands a high level of risk, stress and social responsibility. this sector of the population is sure that high income gives them easy access to investing in the country which is good for everyone, for instance, business owners with a good generous income could invest in open or create more companies which always bring more work opportunities for the country. However, not all their income is being invested in the country, this sector of people tend to invest outside of the country because it brings more income for their self, and unfortunately, the money that goes out of the country always returns for the investors.
On the other hand, a population sector think the government should regulate this high salaries because that is not fair with the rest of the population that is working harder, and deserve a reasonable salaries, for instance, people who work with the community, helping local people, doctors how look after their own population, engineers and in general, all people who work for improve locally.
I believe that the only way that the government can help to regulate high incomes is by taxes, and those taxes have to be invested on open more job opportunities and in the local society and infrastructure, that is the only way to keep those high incomes under control and helping the nation at the same time.
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Suggestion: This
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Suggestion: ,  
...of the population that is working harder, and deserve a reasonable salaries,...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'salary'?
Suggestion: salary
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, then, while, as to, for instance, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98397435897 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88822957346 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49358974359 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.3642738778 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 222.142857143 106.682146367 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.5714285714 20.7667163134 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230868385178 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10713383416 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306062751767 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131592336593 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035270086089 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.3 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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