In some countries university students live at home with their families while they study, whereas in other countries students attend University in another city. Do you think the benefits of living far away from home during the university outweigh the disadvantages?
In this contemporary world where money matters a lot, a person has to learn the skill of living. It is quite common in today’s world that many students go to college in various cities other than their hometown whereas some prefer living with their family for their studies. In my opinion, although staying with family has many advantages, however, staying alone and far from home is much more beneficial for the overall development of a student. This essay will discuss the various advantages of staying away from home in contrast to staying with them.
To begin with, staying alone and far from family needs lots of patience. Firstly, one master the skill of living in a society when he or she gets to know about different problems of life whether it is personal or social etc. Secondly, they are forced to manage their day to day activities on their own such as washing clothes, waking up on time etc. most importantly, it fosters the time management skills in them. Thirdly, on the financial front they develop the skill to manage their money, moreover, they learn the importance of money and value them. Lastly, they develop a sense of realization of their own responsibilities. Furthermore, they grow as a strong and confident person. For instance, a recent study done by the “Psychological Department” of a University of California proved that 60% of students who were far from their home were bold enough to take up any challenges in life than the ones who lived with their family. Thus, it is intuitively obvious that one gets a lot more to learn and achieve when he is far from the comforts of his home.
On the other hand, there are some benefits of staying at home like, one does not have to take care of his or her daily needs as they are completely dependent on their parents. In addition to this, they also do not bother to check their expenses. In case of any help related to academics or finances, they get help from their family members. Therefore, in this case, students never get a chance to develop their managing skills and most of the time fail to gather the confidence to do something bigger in life. To illustrate with an example, there was an article published in “The Hindu” newspaper which made a succinct comparison between both the types of student and showed that 60% of student who lives alone was more positive towards life, was good at managing skills and also had larger dreams to pursue in life.
To conclude, after analyzing all the aspects of the given argument it is evident that studying in a different city other than the hometown has many benefits which overbalance the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, whereas, as to, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 41.998997996 190% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2203.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 459.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79956427015 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69653238845 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507625272331 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9015069662 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.947368421 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1578947368 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1052631579 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282135368565 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809863116447 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546779056123 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158445171877 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071940648318 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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