Many parents believe that when their children read books for entertainment, they are wasting their time, and that they should read only serious educational books.
What is your opinion about this?
Knowledge gained in any form is never wasted. It is commonly believed by guardians that children should spend their time reading textbooks related to their course rather than wasting time on comics or other similar books. However, according to me, parents should focus on the overall development of their child because to compete in this competitive world one not only need academic knowledge but should be aware of the current affairs and the various trends prevailing in the market.
To begin with, enjoyable books can lead to the overall cognitive development of the child. Firstly, these books contain colorful pictures which can help foster the creativity of the child. Secondly, books containing puzzles or riddles can help develop the intellectual power of the child, most importantly, it can improve the thinking ability. Thirdly, reading novels and articles can benefit the child to get a grip of the language and increase its vocab. Lastly, reading books containing stories with some aim can help imprint the moral values in the child while they are still in their childhood phase. To illustrate with an example, a recent study by the “Education and Development” authority showed that 50% of the children who spent their leisure time reading the entertainment or story books were more equipped to demonstrate imaginative thoughts and moral values than those who only focused on curriculum books.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that curriculum books hold equal importance. As in this contemporary world, everyone is running behind money and quality of life, it is necessary to get a job to make a living. Thus, one needs to acquire knowledge from the course book to pursue the job of his dream. In addition to this, an educated person holds a respectful status in society. Furthermore, a person who is well educated and can contribute to the development of the nation is a responsible citizen. For instance, a student pursuing a career in medicine should be dedicated towards his studies as his profession requires a tremendous amount of dedication and hard work and the contribution he will make towards the growth of the society cannot be overstated.
To conclude, both sides have their own advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, to help a child stand confidently in the world, he should get an opportunity to learn each and every aspect of life rather than focusing only on the academic front.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11278195489 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8437115598 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8527504909 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4705882353 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3529411765 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266796559892 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722489654794 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760506546175 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149806198078 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804475564134 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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