Some people think that paying taxes is a good enough contribution to society, while others think people have more responsibilities as member of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
In this contemporary world, everyone is running behind money. Although, money can buy happiness sometimes, however, it is not the solution to every problem. It is commonly believed that contributing a small amount of money from ones’ salary is the major contribution we can make to the society, nevertheless, there are many others who do not agree with this thought. According to me, society needs much more from its inhabitants and not just investing money. This essay will discuss both the opinions.
To begin with, there are many man-made actions such as deforestation, carbon emission, illegal dumping of toxic waste etc. have caused great harm to our environment. Therefore, it is the responsibility of each person living in this world to help reduce global warming. For example, a recent study by the “Air Pollution” experts showed that the number of vehicles causing the incomplete combustion of fossil fuels have increased by 50% since the nineteenth century. Thus, this is something which the government could not handle it alone without the support of the people. Additionally, people should encourage themselves and take different modes of public transports to reduce air pollution.
On the other hand, people can contribute towards the advancement of society by paying taxes timely as this will help the government plan their activities beforehand. Most importantly, a single person cannot change the world. Hence, the government should impose strict laws and increase taxes on all the destructive things sustaining in our society. For instance, there was a recent bill passed by the government over the band of plastic and to the surprise, a survey showed that 40% of people showed a positive response to this band and finally contributed to it.
To sum up, in my opinion, everyone is equally important to contribute in making this world a better place to live in. In addition, the government should impose proper laws to actually make things happen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 373, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ers who do not agree with this thought. According to me, society needs much more from its inhab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2641509434 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87006843622 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619496855346 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8751600645 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4705882353 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9411764706 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147228711242 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409113356019 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466555175357 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813008946759 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485597651828 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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