Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Sport for people in general is very importent, because if you do any exercises you will have a good shape and a good health. There are lot of opinion on this issue. One people things that some people have natural talant and abbility and shape. Other people argue that only hard work and playing sport be able to a good shape and will give you successfulness. I personale believe that only hard work can make you a winner. In this essay I will try to find out the bothe view for this quastion.
First of all. The main reason for success in a sport is health. Many people born with health problems, sush as blidnes, hert problems can not give people doing exercises. For instance my friend`s sister who has week bones she can not play sport games, because she imminently brake her bones. However my wife`s brother has perfect shape and suberb play in footbol. I kow him well and he never do any exerceces, he smokes, he drinkes and does not have any problems with his health. I believe that he has a natural ability. I sure it is can be.
Second of all, I suppose, and many people agru with me that only doing other of type sport activities give human good shape, good health. For example Arnold, I am a fan of him, grow week child in the small vilage. But he has dessided to be a famous. As I know he worked hard. He spent about 6 hours a day in a jum, after he staded and worked on building. He tend to slept arround 5-6 hour a day. Now he is famous person in body building.
Moreover has different opinions for issue I defenately sure that only hard work and motivation be able to give people success in sport/
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'brakes'.
Suggestion: brakes
...lay sport games, because she imminently brake her bones. However my wife's broth...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...because she imminently brake her bones. However my wife's brother has perfect shap...
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Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...in footbol. I kow him well and he never do any exerceces, he smokes, he drinkes an...
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Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... believe that he has a natural ability. I sure it is can be. Second of all,...
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Line 9, column 241, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...small vilage. But he has dessided to be a famous. As I know he worked hard. He spent abo...
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Line 9, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ge. But he has dessided to be a famous. As I know he worked hard. He spent about 6...
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Line 9, column 359, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tends'.
Suggestion: tends
...er he staded and worked on building. He tend to slept arround 5-6 hour a day. Now he...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...is famous person in body building. Moreover has different opinions for issue I defe...
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Line 13, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be able to give people success in sport/
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, for instance, i suppose, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36721311475 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30965862796 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7646266716 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5454545455 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.8636363636 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286693929199 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883428271143 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861271428485 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191375918698 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100928957921 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 13.0946893788 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 12.4159519038 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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