During these recent years, population of cities because of migration from rural areas have been increased sharply. As a result, majority of people in cities have to alter their residence type from house to apartment.
According to last published report in U.S, more than 65% of people are living in apartments. Most social experts estimate that by this immigration procedure, amount of people who they live in apartment will increase to more than 70% in U.S over next decade. Comprehensive investigations illustrated that most of people prefer to live in apartment because of some considerable reasons and the most prominent reason is high price of houses. People can buy an appropriate apartment by less money in comparison with houses and it is more economical for them. Some people prefer to live in apartments because of safety. They emphasize that living in apartment is safer than houses undoubtedly.
On the other hand, some people think that houses are more spacious in comparison with vertical buildings and this space make them more relaxed. Most of them believe that houses with separated rooms and areas, can help children to be more independent and using sufficient space to play, make them more innovative. It is undeniable that children in houses are more active and maybe happier than children in apartments. In addition some issues in apartments with neighbors cause to conflict. Lots of people think that by living in house they can eliminate this type of problems certainly.
In conclusion, living in apartments because of increasing population of cities and house`s price is unavoidable. I prefer to live in house because I can utilize space more and it is more enjoyable for me. In my attitude living in house can help me to have my individual space for reading books, thinking and working on my favorites. I think it is very essential for people in all over the world to have their own space.
- Nowadays, distance-learning programs are commonplace, but some people argue that they are not as good as those attending in a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people argue that competitive sports are good for bringing together different people and cultures. Others argue that these sports can cause problems and increase conflict between nations. Discuss both pints and give your opinion. 56
- Some people think that children should start school sooner while others believe they should not start it before the age of seven. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- It is much more convenient to watch movie on television or computer than buy a ticket and go to the cinema. In the nearest future the popularity of cinemas will drastically decline. Do you agree or disagree? 84
- Some people say that the Olympic games don’t have a role to play in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 40, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...According to last published report in U.S, more than 65% of people are living in ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...ent will increase to more than 70% in U.S over next decade. Comprehensive investi...
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Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...hensive investigations illustrated that most of people prefer to live in apartment because of ...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...happier than children in apartments. In addition some issues in apartments with neighbor...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'conflicting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: conflicting
...sues in apartments with neighbors cause to conflict. Lots of people think that by living in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.021875 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75849363048 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478125 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0182120977 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5294117647 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146872608545 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599533664231 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298480070064 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941025692656 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141097573804 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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