some people believe think that music plays an important role in society. others think it is simply a form of entertainment
discuss both views and give your opinion
Time is altering and so is the general view on resounding prominence of music, the world around. Although music is said by some to be just a form of leisure pursuit, it will be demonstrated by this essay it might not be the case. Throughout the following paragraphs, the indispensable role of music in times of crisis will be meticulously scrutinized.
Creating a pretext to relax, dance, communicate and, by and large, have some quality of time, music, irrespective of its genre or origin is claimed to be merely a kind of pastime, on the one side. For the time being individuals from all walks of life stream songs online in disparate languages day in, day out without even comprehending what its lyrics mean just out of getting pleasure and momentarily get away from hectic lifestyle. It is, thus, crystal clear that people regard rhythm and beats as a kind of recreation, providing them with a context to luxuriate.
The role of music unavoidably goes beyond just entertainment but to transmitting social memes such as courage, sympathy and patriotism, notably in case of emergencies, war and earthquake to name but a few, on the other hand. Take long-lasting conflict between Iran and Iraq, commenced about 40 years ago. In the event that nationalistic songs had not been composed to arouse the youth’s aspiration to defend their territory, Iran would have seen a major decline in the number of its soldiers in the early years of conflict and perhaps stopped the war much earlier than it actually did. By shedding some light on this glaringly apparent example, the decisive role of music when a country encounter with a problematic situation is clarified.
To recapitulate, after a careful situational analysis, to view music only as a form of entertainment is deemed to be strikingly superficial. Indeed, its crucial role in conveying social memes particularly in the event of emergencies is irrefutably inevitable. It is, therefore, hoped this compelling ground of paramount significance will be taken into consideration by societies in the foreseeable future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, therefore, thus, kind of, such as, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10263929619 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08325662127 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607038123167 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1058396583 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.846153846 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136337764981 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497567032848 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384502843617 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822904164395 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288609103657 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.