Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree with this view?
Tourism industry is a flourishing business and a tangible source of income for the developing nations today. Many people believe that, the foreigners should pay more money to visit cultural heritage and enjoy tourist spots. I certainly agree with the aforementioned statement and this essay will further describe, why it is necessary to do so.
Firstly, the financial gains from international tourism is imminent . The hefty amount of money collected in terms of entry fees or sightseeing fees can be used by government to provide subsidies to locals, which, in turn can be used to maintain heritage places, traditional structures and others of that ilk. By doing so, the beauty of the place is enhanced and it will attract more visitors.
Secondly, this business is a fair trade. Monetory output in the tourism industry is inevitable. For instance, a country like India, which has an enriched history, and being a land of monuments and temples, can earn huge benefit with minimal investment.
Lastly, overcrowding can be avoided at a tourist site if it's visit is paid. Flocks of people can damage the beauty of the nature, which could be avoided by changing entry fee. Also, when a place is not free to visit, it's admiration and appreciation is incredibly increased.
To reiterate, it is thoughtful to charge more to foreign tourists than the locals, while their trip, as it will provide financial support to many parts of world
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s from international tourism is imminent . The hefty amount of money collected in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05462184874 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79249758305 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621848739496 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6091883044 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5384615385 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243935061289 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739377865759 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606101477756 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122206306667 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487707050213 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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