Some people think its better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Other people it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
What kind of friends should one have is often debatable, those that think alike or those that differ on some occasions? I tend to believe that sometimes having a difference in opinion is healthy as you get different viewpoints and it improves your emotional response.
Being surrounded by like-minded friends will not only boost one’s confidence, but also help them seek people of the same thoughts and thrive together. To begin with, friends help to increase one’s confidence if they have the same attitude and focus on similar qualities. A fitting example of this is businessmen always seem to have pals who are into businesses themselves; it helps them bond and grow on the same principles that made them run a business. Moreover, people who think alike seek comfort in people who share those values and find it meaningful to grow their community with the same beliefs. For instance, people who choose to eat vegetarian food would be happier and find it fulfilling to be in a community of plant eaters and to add value to it. Therefore having a group that thinks and shares the same values, helps in increasing individual confidence and to grow together as a community.
Having people that don’t have the same opinions as you do has two primary advantages. Firstly, it introduces us to ideas and notions we couldn’t have come up with. For example, if it wasn’t for Galileo, we wouldn’t have challenged the notion that the planet Earth revolves around its Sun and not the other way round. Secondly, it aids us to understand difference of opinion and respect and love those individuals as friends. For instance, if our friend thinks differently on some topic, we wouldn’t dismiss it at the first instance, we would likely hear their thoughts on it and open ourselves to another point of view, thereby improving our ability to interact without hurting our friends emotions. Hence, friends that don’t agree with us provide us various views and help our emotional ability.
In conclusion, according to me, although there are advantages of having buddies that agree with you, the advantages of having friends disagree with you on some occasions far outweigh the advantages of them agreeing with you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...of plant eaters and to add value to it. Therefore having a group that thinks and shares t...
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Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ferently on some topic, we wouldn't dismiss it at the first instance, we wou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07567567568 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77998165961 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1810057027 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.2 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446136837532 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140161726157 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547345654025 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233843980688 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644486688457 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.