Technology brought a plethora of changes in all walks of life. Mainly, the communication style of public got tremendous changes. There are some people who assert that technology has the made people more sociable, whilst some hold a dissertation opinion. Overage of technology draws people in troubles.
On the one hand, technology occupied the crucial role in terms of communication. In the on-going days people are using wide range technology so called mobiles tablets laptops many other. By means of these gadgets public are talking with their friends and families with an ease. For instance, applications like whatsapp,facebbok ,Instagram, twiiter,skype ,ae used for commnuication even group video calls are inuse from tehse application. moreover, the people with likeminded are easily becoming friends through social applications. As result, recent chronicle on social networking says that everyday over 5 billion people are getting involved in social media averagely. However, there is few set of negative shades in n communication through wed.
On the other hand, it is true that internet replaced the communication virtually. Noe- a- days people are interacting with one on one more thorough technology than directly. This causes in weakens the bonding between the people. Asa live example, a survey conducted in a college with 5000 students shows 70% of their communication was done through online. This impacted students communication skills and they encountered chaos during job interviews. Not only Communicatons skills the public are losing their affection towards loved ones and involving in wrong relationships.
In conclusion, from the aforementioned details the Technoloy usage should be limited if it excesses it cause catastrophic situations.
- the bar chart below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. 73
- Both government and individuals are spending too much money protecting animals and their habitat. This money should be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and health care. To what extent do you agree?
- Both government and individuals are spending too much money protecting animals and their habitat. This money should be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and health care. To what extent do you agree?
- The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. 78
- The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Technology brought a plethora of changes...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...echnology draws people in troubles. On the one hand, technology occupied the...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
... role in terms of communication. In the on-going days people are using wide range techno...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun other seems to be countable; consider using: 'many others'.
Suggestion: many others
...ology so called mobiles tablets laptops many other. By means of these gadgets public are t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , facebbok
...For instance, applications like whatsapp,facebbok ,Instagram, twiiter,skype ,ae used for ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Instagram
...ce, applications like whatsapp,facebbok ,Instagram, twiiter,skype ,ae used for commnuicati...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , skype
...ke whatsapp,facebbok ,Instagram, twiiter,skype ,ae used for commnuication even group v...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ae
...sapp,facebbok ,Instagram, twiiter,skype ,ae used for commnuication even group video...
^^^
Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...calls are inuse from tehse application. moreover, the people with likeminded are easily ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 629, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...says that everyday over 5 billion people are getting involved in social media ave...
^^
Line 3, column 697, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun set seems to be countable; consider using: 'few sets'.
Suggestion: few sets
...cial media averagely. However, there is few set of negative shades in n communication t...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...des in n communication through wed. On the other hand, it is true that inter...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... was done through online. This impacted students communication skills and they encounter...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and involving in wrong relationships. In conclusion, from the aforement...
^^^
Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...age should be limited if it excesses it cause catastrophic situations.
^^^^^
Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hould be limited if it excesses it cause catastrophic situations.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65413533835 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13921255024 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669172932331 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7611768305 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5555555556 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166647672802 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504132635515 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802518576898 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997498191371 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987800383476 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.