Some people think that rich countries should support poor countries in terms of aid for health care and education. To what extent do you agree.
The Scarcity of health care products and lack of education are some of the current issues which the underprivileged countries are facing today. It is commonly believed that the advanced nation such as The United States of America, India etc. should come forward to help other needy countries. Even, I agree with this thought. According to me, when rich nations help poor nations, it is a win-win situation for both.
To begin with, there are various territories which do not have proper hospital facilities as either they are below the poverty line or war-torn. The people living in these countries do not get the required medical care on time because of which many unknown diseases get a discovery, moreover, they will not only affect the inhabitants of these poor countries but, also, it can spread to other rich or advanced nation. However, if prompt action is taken against the disease and provided with proper medication, various health issues can be avoided. For example, there was a recent break down of “Ebola” virus which affected almost half of the population of Africa, but a timely help by World Health Organization caught hold of the spread.
On the other hand, the education stands on a pedestal which is above all. In various ways, an educated country can contribute to the advancement of the universe. Countries with poor education system will not be able to sustain for long. While a small gesture of help towards the education ground can not only help these war-torn counties but also help in maintaining peace throughout the world. In any case, no one wants to live in a world full of crime and destruction.
To sum up, it is a social responsibility of a wealthy country to extend support to those in need and poverty-stricken. It will not only benefit the world but also the people living in it. Therefore, in my opinion, counties with strong financial background should come forward and provide assistance to other poor nations. After all, we all belong to the same family of humanity.
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Suggestion: some
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, after all, for example, such as, in any case, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9298245614 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73475453947 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576023391813 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2284786224 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202561358748 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056278833406 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590535989248 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122946409398 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315956006785 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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