Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing and martial art should be banned from TV as well as from international sporting competitions.
To what extent do you agree?
There is an issue about the broadcast of violent sports contests. Some social workers think that they have negative effect on society and suggest restricting their coverage on television. This essay disagrees with their opinion.
Let us start with reasons why some social workers argue that the state authorities should prohibit atrocious contests from broadcasting. The first reason is that it can make children behave aggressively. Immature minds are usually susceptible to the idea of dominating among peers, so once they see how MMA fighters beat one another ruthlessly, they may start to abuse others in the same way. Another reason is that it may cause international conflicts. Two different nations are likely to attack each other, when, for example, one boxer wins the other in the final. Furthermore, many sports competitions may lose a large audience. Sport events, which promote violent contests, may experience a rating fall, since people, who are intolerant to any signs of brutality, stop watching such events.
However, some sports commentators claim that the government should allow such sport events on TV. They justify their point of view by the following arguments. Firstly, violence is part of human nature. People tend to conduct aggressively towards other people, so competitions, involving violence, have little influence on the mood of TV spectators. Secondly, children can find martial arts appealing. Many children quit bad habits, such as smoking, and enroll for boxing, once they watch international boxing contests on television. Moreover, many athletes can gain fame and wealth. Many boxers, for instance, become rich as well as famous, when tv channels broadcast them in championships, which compel a great number of viewers.
In conclusion, although some social workers state that the government should forbid brutal sports on TV screens, I think that the matter of choice whether to watch such sports should be individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44117647059 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76666944595 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650326797386 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.7124139398 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6315789474 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05263157895 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267417484728 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648604647877 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749698316326 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159791387521 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770666228323 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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