Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities.
It is believed by some that people are happier in their adolescent years while others are of the opinion that adulthood come with a lot more joy despite many obligations. In my opinion, I think that the later years of ones life are the happiest.
On the one hand, teenagers live free and wild and do not consider life to be difficult as they find joy in having people to fall back on when it comes to meeting their needs. They are not saddled with any responsibilities, from the very basic needs of life to complex matters and decision making. For instance, a young child living under his parents has no cause to worry about house rent, hospital bills or money for groceries since his parents are readily available to meet his financial and health needs.
Additionally, young children in this time of their lives, are free to explore the world and make mistakes which they most of the times get away with or have their parents to cushion the effect even when they make grievous mistakes.
On the other hand, as one gets older and transitions into adulthood, the feeling of living independently of their parents influence, notwithstanding the burden of being responsible for all of ones cares is considered the best time of ones life. This is because, as an adult, decision making about when to go out and come back is done without having to answer to anyone.
Furthermore, adults get to make money and spend it whenever they desire. For example, An adult is free to move out of his parents house as soon as he starts making money. They can also have friends over, party and drink without questions. This is why some will consider adult life the happiest years.
In conclusion, while the young ones enjoy their formative years, I am of the opinion that adulthood is the best time of one’s life since one can live independently of the opinions of others, make money and spend it at will.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65868263473 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45671043342 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532934131737 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4382186569 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.692307692 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201147406831 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784782082236 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680937248136 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108432363748 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726968666013 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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