some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them other scientists think it is the bad idea and would be dangerous discuss both views and give your own opinion
it is undeniable fact that most of the people have been fascinated by the thoughts of alien life elsewhere in the universe. A few researchers have believe about the existence of unknown creature on other planets and have interest to sent them signals; however, some of them have contradiction with this notion. I intend to explain both views in a subsequent paragraphs.
To the formal view, with SETI -the search for extra Terrestrial intelligence. Scientist use radio telescope to search for signals from alien civilizations. The first and the foremost benefit of sending signal to alert aliens societies to humans presence to make it easier for them to find us. Secondly by becoming familiar with them, humans, can get opportunity to unravel the mysteries of hidden fact such as a possibility of life on Mars. Apart from this ,there would be a chance of acquiring their intelligent tricks in term of developing the country such as powerful mechanical tool for safety of humanity. As a consequence ,any territory would capable for preventing their society from their opponent.
To support the latter view, although, intelligent life forms would have power as well as intelligency yet to some extent, it may prove adverse Idea and harmful for the earth. firstly, the drawback of sending message to them, there are chances to destroy the whole society and species on earth by them; by which, the existence of flora and fauna would be come on the verge of disappearance. The second one demerit can be taken into account that if alien forms arrive at Earth then some of evil thinking persons take profit from them in term of negative way as it is seen in Hindi film 'Koi Mil Gya'.
To recapitulate, with the given aforementioned possible discussion, It is abundantly clear that even though unfamiliar living organism can impart numerous advantages but the grave consequences cannot be neglected. if they exist are either insignificantly more or less advanced than humans. therefore it would be extremely risky to Endeavour sent them messages from Earth
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, such as, as well as, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06764705882 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82682864843 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1490125077 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.866666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250367621647 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072150059097 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053434289985 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138032537718 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511030158338 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.