Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. However some others think extremely dangerous games should be banned. Why do people take part in dangerous sports give some suggestions on how to deal with dangerous.
Many sports are played or watched for entertainment or recreational purpose, however, there are some sports which are dangerous and life threatening. Due to potential accidents and harms they can cause, some people think such games should be banned. On the other hand, some other think such games should be continued with highest possible safety measures. Both opinions should be discussed before drawing a conclusion.
The main reasons people in favour of those games are, firstly, some people are naturally challenge lovers. They love to thrill themselves by participating or watching adventure such as mountain climbing, Bungee jumping, Boxing etc. Secondly, performing such dangerous games distinguish them from ordinary people and prove them outstanding. Thirdly, performing risky games or doing such stunts helps them to make money and fame in short period of time. For example: high speed car racing, boxing are high paid sports. Finally, some of the dangerous games are culturally important in some communities. For example: boxing is the national game of Thailand.
On the other hands, some people are against such games and they think such risky games should be banned. Their main argument is that such dangerous games could cause accidents and cost people’s lives. For example: any small mistake on high speed car racing could kill driver himself and many others on the side. Secondly, betting on such games could encourage gambling activities. Sometimes game fixing can also avoids fairness of the game.
In my personal opinion, although there are some drawbacks, banning of such games is not really necessary. First of all, millions of people love such games and so it is not good idea to go against the choice of a large number of people. Similarly, it is a very large entertainment industry which promote a lot of income generating activities. Last but not the least, it is against the people who think such games are part of their culture and life style. However, higher safety measures and protective equipments are to be applied to reduce the risk. Furthermore, government should play an important role to regulate and monitor such games by promulgating safety rules and regulation.
In conclusion, it can be said that banning such games is not a solution but practicing such game in safe manner under the government regulation is the way to reduce accidents and risks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, in short, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19845360825 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66003730005 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515463917526 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9913030872 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6956521739 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8695652174 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5652173913 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310430082999 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101213307258 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883147001003 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193000574088 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107398928354 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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