Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things.
What is your opinion?
The cost for the expedition to the universe is massive, only a few numbers of the country in the world could afford to launch rockets. Recently, even the United States, the most wealthy and powerful nation, has stopped their space program. I am on the side of such suspension to space exploration and shifting the budget to other much essential matters.
First of all, the actual amount of expenses on space research is way more than the numbers that people would assume. The entire cost would not be only counted on the rocket launching, but some necessary stages, like early research, development, training, maintenance, and post-mission analysis, etc., should also be calculated in terms of both money and time. Therefore, if such humongous resources could be moved out from exploring other planets, it will bring some significant changes to the people who live on this planet earth.
There are many things have higher priority than the journey to space, such as the cure for diseases and poverty. As life is the most important thing to all of us, it is much wise to allocate the capital and workforce to the research of incurable diseases like cancer and AIDs. Moreover, if we gave up the study of the universe, we could have sufficient power to aid poverty through education. Rather than seeking the unknown from outer space, the investment on education, such as building more school and rising the teacher to student ratio, is a guaranteed down-to-earth solution to problems for the present and future.
In conclusion, while the study of space may be academically necessary, I believe the money should be much more appropriate to spend on education and hence solving all problems from the root.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97902097902 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64632423053 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.9012520737 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.4 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22375204939 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810084851903 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610973071228 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137360987039 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592832665567 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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