Task 2: Some countries allow old people to work to any age that they want. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In several nations, workers can prolong their duration in the workplace whatever their age induces benefits and drawbacks. In the following essay, I will analyze to determine which surpasses the other.
Extending working tenure can help people to earn more money to improve their family life standard. Therefore, people will be able to assist their family to pay for a lot of fees in daily life. For instance, they can help their child or their parents buy some equipment in house. In addition, by working harder without considering the number of years they are, workers can also live on their passion for more time. Particularly, it allows people to gain more skills in their career than if they only work for a set amount of time. Hence, almost all students begin applying for jobs while they are studying in college to get more experience and knowledge to do better in the future, for example. On the other hand, immersing in a job at any age is also problematic for health. To be specific, whether working sooner or later for a fixed time, people have to face some disadvantages including physical and mental health. In the case they are too young to begin working like an officer, they tend to sacrifice their time to balance between working and studying. Moreover, another case will happen when older people decide to work, it will be difficult to adapt to the workload like they were because their health gradually weakens and needs to be relaxed.
Admittedly, staying to work regardless of age can provide numerous advantages. However, it also causes problems when their health is not as strong as possible. Which can make people become exhausted. All in all, this situation tends to offer more value to people if they can ensure their health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ir health is not as strong as possible. Which can make people become exhausted. All i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4547007059 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4480890701 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197521502203 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714083041419 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419336011461 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110913250969 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727220899038 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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