You are planning to stay with a friend in an English speaking country. You are writing to your friend to find out some additional information. In your letter ask the following questions:
• How long should you plan to stay for
• What you should bring with you
• What you would like to do there
Hi Ben,
How are you? How are things at your end? I am deciding for coming to Sydney Australia a week later from now and I am going to stay at my friend's house during this time.
Firstly, I am going to stay at my friend's home at 18th Queen street for a period of about 2 weeks. Mind you about the timings, they are a bit odd since you should come to meet somewhere between 4pm - 9 pm, and don't forget to give me a call before you leave.
Secondly, if you can tell me what clothes, shoes and other stuffs do I need to carry with myself on this trip, it would be a sigh of relief for me as I always tend to forget something before I embark on any new travel. I am carrying Ice boots because that would enable us to go for ice skating.
Thirdly, I would like to enquire about the M.S course in information technology from the University of New South Wales. Basically, just want to have a fair idea on how many subjects in each semester and how likely are the chances of getting a scholarship in that course.
Many Thanks
Faizal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... meet somewhere between 4pm - 9 pm, and dont forget to give me a call before you lea...
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Line 9, column 46, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...ly, I would like to enquire about the M.S course in information technology from t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19900497512 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23330433882 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651741293532 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6948163726 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180914791118 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724679433163 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693026135842 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108094979413 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696456268189 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.08 12.4159519038 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.