You are planning to stay with a friend in an English speaking country. You are writing to your friend to find out some additional information. In your letter ask the following questions:
• How long should you plan to stay for
• What you should bring with you
• What you would like to do there
Hi Ben,
I hope things are going great at your end. I am planning a trip to Sydney Australia and I plan to stay at your house in one month’s time and there is number of information I am seeking for which I would be grateful if you can find them before my arrival. This will allow me to plan my schedule well in advance and thereby giving me the ample amount of time during my short tenure.
Firstly, our summer vacation has just started and it would be lasting for about 8 weeks starting from 21/02/2017 to 14/04/2017. I know we have been talking about this plan, but there might be chances of school extending the holidays by 2-3 weeks more. If there is going to be any further changes, I am certainly going to re-inform you about the schedule.
Secondly, what recommendation would you like to make? For instance, what types of clothes, shoes and other necessary stuffs do I need to carrying to make my journey smooth and comfortable. Do I Really need a rain coat and an umbrella as well along with clothes and accessories?
Thirdly, I intend to find out about the various varieties of course are available in Sydney on Information technology. Basically, that would only help me to form an unbiased opinion on the authenticity of the courses being offered at different universities and how likely are the chances of getting a scholarship in that course.
Many Thanks
Faizal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: NEED_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'need to carry'?
Suggestion: need to carry
..., shoes and other necessary stuffs do I need to carrying to make my journey smooth and comfortab...
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Line 7, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ell along with clothes and accessories? Thirdly, I intend to find out about the ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for instance, of course, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68699186992 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69863901284 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9038733502 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0833333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136927948979 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046331468621 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437153895975 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752033704013 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341462370661 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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