You are planning to stay with a friend in an English speaking country. You are writing to your friend to find out some additional information. In your letter ask the following questions:
• How long should you plan to stay for
• What you should bring with you
• What you would like to do there
Hi Ben,
How are you? How are things at your end? I am planning for my trip to Sydney Australia and I would reach there on 21/02/2017. During this period, I am going to stay with my friend at his house.
Firstly, I would be residing at my friend's house which is hardly a mile from a reputed and very famous well-known College Saint Street. I am going to stay in my friend’s establishment for a period of 2 weeks from 21/02/2017 to 3/3/2017 and maybe we can catch-up on any weekends while I would be there. What do you think?
Secondly, if you can tell me that what all Stuffs do I need to carry like clothes and shoes etc. Do I need to carry a rain coat and an umbrella as well since it’s going to be a winter season at my arrival? Any information from you before coming on this trip, would be of a great help to me.
Thirdly, probably the most important reason for coming is to investigate about the different courses in Sydney on Information technology. Basically, that would only help me to form an unbiased opinion on the authenticity of the courses being offered at different universities and how likely are the chances of getting a scholarship in that course.
Many Thanks
Faizal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52272727273 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68612520092 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595454545455 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.384769539078 780% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.5943834778 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5384615385 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154488002259 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682157126269 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581822165616 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100663943406 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061826726818 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.