8. You need to travel from your home to a place 40 miles (64 kilometers) away. Compare the different kinds of transportation you could use. Tell which method of travel you would choose. Give specific reasons for your choice.
Transportation has always been one of the biggest concerns for humankind. There is a variety of ways to move around between cities and other places. Depends on your city and your situation it is different. In some big cities such as New York, there is lots of ways for going to another spot. In some small towns such as Centerton or Bentonville, there is a few ways to move around. If I were in this situation for choosing a way for move between two spot, I would choose my self-car. There is other ways such as Uber, group using and etc. Each way has some advantages and some disadvantages. I prefer to choose my own car.
First of all, the most access able way is self-car. Every one prefer to use his/her own car, because of some reasons. One of them is, being ready all the time, each second and each day in a week. The second one is about, being economy. This was the economiest way for travel between two spots. The third reason is about safety. If a person has enough expert to ride a car, he/she would be confidence about his/her trip. He/she knows himself/herself and he/she can trust the driver! On the other hand, this way has some disadvantages too. Some people has not a good or comfortable car. Some of them are not a good driver and etc.
Second of all, the newest way for travel between to cities is using Uber. Some people prefer to just sit in the car and be relax. No driving, no stress and no driver license needed. They want to pay more, but being free of driving. They will use Uber app and order a car. They will get a nearest car in the closest time. As I mentioned that, this way has some disadvantages too, such as paying more or some safety issues, because the passengers don't know about driver. Is he/she a good driver or a bad one? Is his/her car a safe vehicle or not? So this way is not good for some people too.
Finally, the last available way in our city is renting a car. Everybody with a valid driver license can pay for a car and rent it for a determined period time. They can choose their car model or so and they should drive all the way. As a matter of fact, this way has some disadvantages too, such as being bored of driving or doesn't have a driver license and pay a bigger amount compare with their own car. One of my friends in the California rented a car for a week to show her wife around the state. After two days they called me and ask me to find a way to get out of that situation. Their car had a mechanical problem and they were totally unfamiliar with those kind of thing. Also they didn't know that how they can fix it or where they should call. They asked me to help them. After soling that problem, they decided to cancel the whole trip. They were in the lots of stress during that journey.
To sum up, there is lots of ways to choose for travel between two spot, but the easiest and the best way is different for everybody. It depends on everybody's situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'There are other ways'?
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'first of all', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220257234727 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.146302250804 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.08038585209 0.0866891130778 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0337620578778 0.046263068375 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0627009646302 0.0685040099705 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110932475884 0.118717715034 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0289389067524 0.0351676179071 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.27756294565 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0257234726688 0.0309702414327 83% => OK
Particles: 0.0016077170418 0.00188951952338 85% => OK
Determiners: 0.122186495177 0.0887237588012 138% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.016077170418 0.0209618222197 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0032154340836 0.0139019557991 23% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2922.0 2387.08602151 122% => OK
No of words: 556.0 408.028673835 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25539568345 5.86048508987 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.241007194245 0.338922669872 71% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.136690647482 0.251872472559 54% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0719424460432 0.174417080927 41% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0557553956835 0.112833075102 49% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.27756294565 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429856115108 0.524397521467 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.4139010385 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 43.0 20.6684587814 208% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 12.9302325581 20.5533526081 63% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2686367908 48.84282405 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9534883721 120.699889404 56% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9302325581 20.5533526081 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.325581395349 0.644075263715 51% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.54480286738 234% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 26.5992973063 45.7405998639 58% => OK
Elegance: 1.48344370861 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177589790654 0.300154397459 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0984836121822 0.103427244359 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0862972822979 0.0752933317313 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.371326485129 0.497263757937 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114763667928 0.151897553556 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569799728498 0.114077575197 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496635164225 0.0781384742642 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.405656805827 0.336927656856 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.1178674506 0.067059652881 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137063947135 0.210909579961 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314473479278 0.0618886996521 51% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.86379928315 259% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 20.0 4.91756272401 407% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 12.0 2.75985663082 435% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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