Do you agree or disagree? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Over the past few decades, the issue of whether traveling in group by tour leader has received a great deal of attention. Although some may argue that tour guide can be important due to the fact that they are familiar with the challenge through the routh, I as well as many others believe that traveling with a leader could be limited and in some cases it could create hard situations. I an of the opinion that both of the mentioned viewpoints have their own merits and drawbacks, and the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, without a shadow of doubt, all the human in the world respect liberty and they fight throughout the history to gain this valuation. It is sometimes argued that having leader, usually and not in crucial situation, constraint people to do their favourite works. All around the world ,definitly, people travel to other place to fresh their mind meeting new culture and comminucate withe other societies. The tour leader might limits tourists to do their enjoyable works in order to following an specific schedule. For the purpose of illustration, I had registered to travel around the europe by a group and a leader, and when I decided to visit amesterdam, the leader did not allowed me due to the reason that amesterdam was not in the tour leader schedual.
Furthermore, it is establish beyound the doubt that traveling bring people ejoyable times and they prefer to be away from stress. It is a axiomatic that by traveling witha group and a leader, one can faces an significant problem to comminucating with other member of the group due to the differentiate through their beliefs and their interests. As a case of point, my cousin had traveled by a group to the spain. One member in the group had insisted to visit all the churches, in spite of not being in schedule, and had made a hard time for other memeber of the groups.
On the other hand, it is documanted that when people travel to some place new, they do not familiar with its monouments and famous places. having a tour leader, people can avoide getting lost in an stranger country and they do not waste their time on finding specific places. In addition, tour leader knows the cheapest place for resting which is vital for people due to the limitation of their budgets.
In brief, Contemplating all aforementioned reasons, one can draw the conclusion that traveling by a group and having leader is not a good idea chiefly due to the having liberty to descisons in travel and non stressful time reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, in addition, in brief, as well as, in some cases, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2112.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78911564626 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65561440804 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7855780479 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5625 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158142895493 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638375182584 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386304312222 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101702800796 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01000953517 0.0645574589148 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.