Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In any society, the contributions of scientists and engineers are more important than the contributions of artists and writers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
have a glimpse of our rapidly developing country, many careers are contributing to this society. Depending on personal experiences and personality types, people may differ greatly on the question "Whether scientists and engineers are more import than artists and writers". In my opinion, I believe that artists and writers also play a significant role in our whole country. I am going to elaborate my point from three perspectives of appreciation, critical thinking, dreams.
First of all, artists and writers teach us to know what is beauty. The criterion of beauty is too complex to understand at times. So it is crucial for artists and writers to set up a standard to enable people know what is beauty. Additionally, the more appreciation one nation understand, the more powerful the country will become. In this way, both the people and country will move towards a promising and bright future.
Furthermore, artists and writers can not only tell us beauty but can push the society into a process of critical thinking. Knowledge can not be absorbed without questioning it. When discussing a new topic online, writers can attract more people to utter their unique ideas. also, each person started to form their own logical point and defend against others. Therefore, it is a good way to liberate the society.
Last but not least, more younger are able to be encouraged by famous artists and writers. Since it is a huge honor to pursue these kinds of careers, children will dream to be a well-known artists in the future.
Similarly, the society can create an atmosphere of learning writing and painting. Thus, children can be cultivated in a more proper way.
In conclusion, my view of artists and writers also having a big influence on our society is based on several concrete benefits for each person in terms of both present and future. By take more care of art fields, we can find our unique selves and live in a fuller life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ty can create an atmosphere of learning writing and painting. Thus, children can be cul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96036585366 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77843948675 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8035917687 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.35 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120019056917 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345833579975 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368450507677 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593066418061 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388083349358 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.