Government
Nowadays, many people start to pay more attention to our food. Undisputedly, consuming healthy and nutritious food is vital for each person. Thus, the government is supposed to take the responsibility to supply high-quality food in order to make its citizens fit and happy. From my point of view, the government in my country has done a good job in this aspect. I am going to elaborate my point in the following paragraphs.
First, in the past few years, our healthy department has actually released various kinds of policies to detect nourishing supplements. In this way, a large number of citizens definitely consider the government is protecting them from any bad-quality(inferior) food that may damage their health. Prior to these regulations, my father was a crazy fan of a type of fake product because he was cheated by its large-scale advertising campaign. However, thanks to relative departments, he now is able to discern between real and false nutritious food. Consequently, there is no doubt the government is putting efforts to convey correct knowledge to his people.
Furthermore, regulators in our state enhance the punishment of generating unhealthy food. At the same time, fake ads on food are banned in public. Also, food factories dare not to produce false food in case of heavy penalties. For instance, a market has been suspended for two months by a local government since the vegetables they sold was not fresh. Therefore, in a sense, states are taking actions to guarantee its people a better diet style.
Nevertheless, the publicity sometimes cannot(fail to) stretch to everywhere so a small section of citizens has no idea about these reforms. As far as I concerned, it is inevitable since our country land is so large. In practice, officers in healthy departments are doing the deed.
In conclusion, incredible movements done by the government in my state is based on several concrete benefits for us in terms of the present and future. By eating a wide variety of(all sorts of) healthy products, we can work more efficient and live a better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09011627907 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02940870978 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613372093023 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6437592583 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.55 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201418486514 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558029570336 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857925371411 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108543463394 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619338703462 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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