For success in a future job it is more important to relate well with others than to study hard in school. (A/D)
having a glimpse of our rapidly developing society, people start to pay more attention to the way they choose their future job. Undisputedly, we need to prepare ourselves in many front in order to get a promising occupation. Depending on different personal experiences and personality types, people differ greatly when asking whether good relationships or studying hard is more important for your career. In my opinion, I believe that working hard at campus is a better choice. I will elaborate my point from perspectives of.
first of all, the most primary reason is that working hard in the college is the suitable way to gain knowledge, which will substantially determine your career. since people are learning all sorts of subjects, they can obtain a lot of knowledge. With the increasing growth of competition, nowadays, "knowledge is the source of money " has been a rule. it is often reported that some fresh graduates from excellent colleges get a high pay when they are employed by companies for the first time. also, after several works, knowledge based on their day-to-day studying will enable them to progress further towards manager classes. Therefore, only studying hard, can you possess a bright future.
furthermore, studying hard can not provide you knowledge but also help you learn how to cooperate with others. it is true that more you tend to coordinate, more you will make success. In this way, students have the opportunity to cooperate with others. Take me for example, when I first came to my university, I knew I should start to increase my ability of cooperation. In fact, I finished a lot of projects with my classmates. this ability enables to adjust my job environment more quickly. Because making everything around means you have to communicate and work with you colleagues all the time. Thanks to the ability I got from my school, I can work more easily in my position.
Nevertheless, relationship is also a good way to find your job. However, it not reliable sometimes since you cannot ask your friends for help. In the contrast, studying on your own is actually more likely to assistant you to chase your dream.
In conclusion, what I covered above is several concrete ways that will benefit when we pursue a job. By working hard ourselves, we are able to find our unique selves and live a fuller life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, you know, first of all, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94696969697 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81959682625 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565656565657 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0955844235 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.625 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04166666667 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221269389301 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574644887107 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399619248952 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112987620845 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462196708459 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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