smart car
Having a glimpse of our rapid developing society, people pay more attention to choose the vehicle which they go out by. Depending on distinctive personal experiences and personality type, many people may differ greatly when asking whether you drive smart cars or trunks to travel. In my opinion, I believe that smart cars are a better choice. this is true for several reasons and I will elaborate my point from perspective of fast-paced society and relieving stress.
First of all, the most primary reason is that driving a smart car is a suitable way to adjust yourself in a fast-paced society which substantially determines your future life. Nowadays, "time is money" has been a rule, the faster you solve a problem, the more likely you will make success in your career. Recently, it is often reported that many fresh graduates from ordinary school such as North Settle College may get a low pay by their companies for the first time. however, after several works they are probably to be promoted to a high-level manager class due to their smart cars to deal with things more quickly. Absolutely, if you go to work on foot or by bus, you will waste a lot of time on the way to your firm which will make your boss upset and annoyed. Thus, driving a smart car is so important to guarantee us a bright career.
what's more, driving a car can not offer you efficiency but also can allow you to relieve in this private room. it is such a wonderful place that you can do almost everything you can in your car. Take me as an exmple, I like to listen music in my car. when I listen the music sang by Lady Gaga, it seems like these magic music transports me into another different world. I was so relaxed and I can forget my day-to-day worries. however, if I don't own a smart car, I can not do my favorite things so freely. when I read books on a subway, I usually think someone is looking at me, then I may feel embarrassed all the way. Therefore, driving smart cars enables us to relax ourselves.
In conclusion, what I covered above are the concrete benefits that smart cars will bring to us in terms of efficiency and relaxation. By driving smart cars, we can find our unique selves and live a fuller life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51741293532 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53163934875 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564676616915 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.165953414 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374669740709 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141911182011 0.076458572812 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140704164155 0.0737576698707 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259756424486 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246405331284 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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